WOAH THERE WILD BILL. i'm just talking about what we've written so far, up to the point right before the edmurlin confrontation, with a few (but not large) additions in-between to make it flow. and maybe more porn. hell yes to angst ('cos this is me here), violence ('COS THAT IS YOU THERE), and subplot, but all the plot i'm talking about is, the kings of narrrrnia arrive at camelot, edmund is all "pete that is a BAD IDEA", pete and arthur-king lustily glare at each other. THAT is our set-up, and then there is porn ever after. eh? eh?