You're not falling from grace. You're falling into it.
I have a weakness for the "falling from grace" line. No matter how often I hear it or read it or *write* it I love it and it always makes me go *melt*.
However, being constructive, I must say that I enjoyed the whole flow of this fic. The fact that Dom didn't want to answer his phone and the bit of the text-messages.
The part with the woman at the end worries me, but you know, I adore the way you ended it. Just. Lovely.
And the way you described Vancouver. *smiles* Wonderful.
no subject
You're not falling from grace. You're falling into it.
I have a weakness for the "falling from grace" line. No matter how often I hear it or read it or *write* it I love it and it always makes me go *melt*.
However, being constructive, I must say that I enjoyed the whole flow of this fic. The fact that Dom didn't want to answer his phone and the bit of the text-messages.
The part with the woman at the end worries me, but you know, I adore the way you ended it. Just. Lovely.
And the way you described Vancouver. *smiles* Wonderful.
~Cai