. ([identity profile] hackthis.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] whynot 2004-03-23 01:09 am (UTC)

This is absolutely gorgeous. The past tense really is everything and this line was as close to perfect as people ever get: “I want to be the best version of myself around you,” Dom almost said one time, but he didn't. That pretty much says it all, doesn't it? Beautifully done.

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