ext_58060 ([identity profile] lux--aeterna.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] whynot 2004-03-30 05:17 am (UTC)

you write monaboyd too? man, you are my kind of girl.

i love this dom, because he makes excuses for himself, and makes excuses for the fact that he makes excuses, and that is such a brilliant human thing to do. i suck at feedback, but i so love the strange instropection of the piece, because dom is avoiding studying his actions, yet studying them at the same time. if that makes sense.

and just, your style of writing: straight-forward, and without adornment. i love that simplicity ([livejournal.com profile] hack_this has a similar style, which i adore), because writing is about the essentials of things, and this captures that perfectly.

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