Wow. This was very, very good. I just watched Fight Club last night, posted some thoughts and was rec'd this story by jb_slasher. I love how you capture the desolation and recklessness that is so much about what Fight Club is about.
Also love your little oblique reference to Angel Face's hair - I remember a scene where Tyler specifically goes to ruffle Angel Face's hair after he pulls off his ski mask.
Now, I am just aching for a sequel to this in which we get to see how Tyler reminds Angel Face exactly why he's allowed to keep his hair. :))
"Exhaust"
Also love your little oblique reference to Angel Face's hair - I remember a scene where Tyler specifically goes to ruffle Angel Face's hair after he pulls off his ski mask.
Now, I am just aching for a sequel to this in which we get to see how Tyler reminds Angel Face exactly why he's allowed to keep his hair. :))
Bravo, Lassiter! *adds to memories*