Oh man, I *loved* reading this a second time! Every detail is beautiful and significant, it's so visual and I love it. And the commentary was just that much more awesome! I love hearing about the processes and outside bits and sources (especially for this fic. I am on page two of that same Durkheim book right now! so excited for it!)
SMOOTH EDDIE P. XD
You incorporated the Eucharist into this? And wrote Judas/Jesus? YOU ARE MY HERO.
I like to read that Jadis was freaking Edmund out, because I was a little freaked out that he was so anxious to go back to her without Susan to interrupt. But I loved the repetition of Susan killing Jadis, again and again. very ritualistic.
the story-telling theme, about control, about every moment being another beginning and end, about the universe's creation! that one was fantastic.
This story is also very sexy, but you knew that. I am amazed at how many times you say "and then they had sex" and I totally believe it. And that body-spell-painting scene is one of my very very favorites, possibly ever. I swoon'd.
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SMOOTH EDDIE P. XD
You incorporated the Eucharist into this? And wrote Judas/Jesus? YOU ARE MY HERO.
I like to read that Jadis was freaking Edmund out, because I was a little freaked out that he was so anxious to go back to her without Susan to interrupt. But I loved the repetition of Susan killing Jadis, again and again. very ritualistic.
the story-telling theme, about control, about every moment being another beginning and end, about the universe's creation! that one was fantastic.
This story is also very sexy, but you knew that. I am amazed at how many times you say "and then they had sex" and I totally believe it. And that body-spell-painting scene is one of my very very favorites, possibly ever. I swoon'd.