It's good live, but there was only one or two scenes that I thought were really really awesome. the rest of it seemed over the top. but maybe that's just Oklahoma City? lol.

yes I did! And I read it over twice and marked some stuff, and I don't know how picky you want me to be but I tried to strike a happy medium between "wuss" and "obnoxious." is it okay if I send it back now? and then if you want me to go over it again I will still have time :))