ext_93626 ([identity profile] zempasuchil.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] whynot 2009-04-02 05:31 am (UTC)

OMG OMG OMG YAY YOU WROTE MERLIN AND WILL
SDFLAS AND FOR MY BIRTHDAY *flails!*
omg lass you are the sweetest! :DDDDDDD

THIS IS SO MUCH ADORABLE FUN. adventuresome boys and bromance! giant bulrushes! INCIDENTS lol That One Time With The Geese! eating a mountain of apples! sdfksdfkl I love them!

he sort of wanted to leave. Or rather, he wanted to arrive. - <333333333 this line is soooo much love

the boys had concocted elaborate schemes to camouflage themselves with magic and strategically placed foliage in case someone should ever come here looking for them. To their disappointment, no one ever had.
HEE. this is the perfect portrayal of adventuring runaway kids, it brings me right back to fifth grade!

For such a troublemaker, you’ve always been good at taking care of people.
LIKE BEING A MANSERVANT oh dude yes. yay merlin, who takes care.

awwwww Merlin wondering about his humanity! and this: Understanding dawned on Will’s face, and he said, “Oh. Well, yeah. Of course.” He shrugged, and his smile was genuine. “I mean, a human who's not very good at bulrush jousting, but no one’s perfect.”
HOW CUTE. I LOVE YOUR WILL.

I really really like that you ran this backwards in time, because it can end with something so very very happy as And the world opened up with possibility. Merlin fandom needs more of this because of course everyone knows how every story ends... it's just a question of how they get there. awwwww Merlin and Will! now Merlin leaving for Camelot after it all/when the story starts is even sadder after all this beautiful loving story. *flail*

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