ext_93626 ([identity profile] zempasuchil.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] whynot 2008-12-09 11:06 pm (UTC)

omggg the desert! magic! Your imagery is so beautiful and engrossing and I love love love the desert winds, the painting-on-bodies, . And the subtle knife! AWESOME. Your Susan is so fascinating here. So, so loyal, her strength in how she bends.

The hookah storytelling has made me want to go to the hookah bar again with friends and bring The Arabian Nights to read aloud while smoking. Not so much magical swirling shapes, but still... so awesome.

Susan laughs. “At least we are doing this for good.”

“We are doing this for Narnia, sister,” he says, “and nothing else.”


Oh Edmund! such a harsh realist! Between his White Witch dreams and love of being alone in the desert and neoliberalism and how he interacts with Susan, he makes me want to cry in this story. in a good way. but still.

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