commenting as i read, do forgive the rambling, as it's sure to follow.
first of all, the arabian nights! so much love.
“Peter wouldn’t approve of this.”
“Peter,” he responds, “is not here.”
NGH. MY BRAIN, WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO IT. also, this:
She bends to be face to face with him, and smiles. “I am yours.”
just kills me. i have no idea how to put into words how much that line hits me. i've got to stop quoting now, or i'll have the entire thing copy&pasted.
i literally have chills right now. this is one of the best things i've read in a very long time. especially the end, edmund holding on to jadis, OH AND THE WINDS AND MAGICS IN THE BEGINNING, DID I MENTION THAT PART?
oh dear, this comment does not make the least bit of sense. love for this fic anyway. ♥
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first of all, the arabian nights! so much love.
“Peter wouldn’t approve of this.”
“Peter,” he responds, “is not here.”
NGH. MY BRAIN, WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO IT. also, this:
She bends to be face to face with him, and smiles. “I am yours.”
just kills me. i have no idea how to put into words how much that line hits me. i've got to stop quoting now, or i'll have the entire thing copy&pasted.
i literally have chills right now. this is one of the best things i've read in a very long time. especially the end, edmund holding on to jadis, OH AND THE WINDS AND MAGICS IN THE BEGINNING, DID I MENTION THAT PART?
oh dear, this comment does not make the least bit of sense. love for this fic anyway. ♥