briar_pipe: Actress on a bike with cherry blossoms (teyla)
Know when to walk away ([personal profile] briar_pipe) wrote in [personal profile] whynot 2009-03-04 11:12 am (UTC)

Oh, did I not comment on this yesterday? I should have: it's awesome.

You got their voices pitch-perfect. There's a lovely tension here, a warmth and desperation in their words that builds through the spareness of your style. I love how they're all certain of each other even though they're not certain about anything else. This is very much my own vision of the four of them; thank you for painting it so vividly.

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