http://marlowe78.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] marlowe78.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] whynot 2010-02-25 10:47 am (UTC)

*giggle*
We can use someone who believes so hard and is so joyous in her faith, even if her equivalent of singing hymns is writing gay incest porn.
Such an awesome line! Laughed my ass off!
She also makes awesome marzipan bars.
Even better!
That sequence about Becky is pure gold. You can read the adoration, puzzlement and love Chuck has for her out of every line.

"Wow, really? I was actually gonna roll right over and lick his boots, but I'll take your suggestion into consideration."
Oh boy, the sarcasm! *laugh*

It was just some elephants, dear. "It was Dean." Brilliant line! Oh boy, do I love this!

Such a funny fic, and I like Chuck a lot, he has this...fatalistic and yet very down-to-earth view of the world (and it's end). I liked him the first time I saw him, and I liked him even more for ordering hookers when his visions told him the end is near (THAT was awesome)
And now, I like your Chuck with that crazy Becky and his elephants.
This is really, really good. And the 1st person POV is rather fitting.

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