ext_38339 ([identity profile] kimboosan.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] whynot 2010-05-16 03:44 pm (UTC)

YAY Casfest! I pull out hair trying to write up my entry. Really. TOUGH MEANINGFUL LIFE QUESTIONS like, "what tropes do you prefer?" *whimpers* But I did it! Woo hoo!

Loved both the codas - I like the way you have Sam, listing and rambling and not really connected. I mean, I like how you portrayed it, not that I like Sam that way. Wait, more coffee. *slurp* Okay, so, if Sam is back to being mostly-human or whatever, I can see that this is how he would be, acting grief stricken and disoriented, and latching onto what he knows which is, ironically, "Dean in absentia".

Also enjoyed the take on Lisa. As I told one friend, "don't hate Lisa! She's just a tool of the patriarchy!" But you made her more than that - especially with the phone calls Dean was making, and her doubts, and the way she is playing it cool. Nicely done! Thank you so much!


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