ext_9264 ([identity profile] murron.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] whynot 2010-11-26 06:31 pm (UTC)

Holy cow that was brilliant!! This one pulled me in right from the first line and didn't let me go.

Your Sam-voice is prefect, it's spot-on. Also, you totally sold the Sassy OTP to me. You wrote the connection between the two of them in such a fragile, fractured way it makes my heart hurt for them.

I also love how you weave in Cas partnership with Dean and the painful distance between Dean and Sam. There are so many tender spots in this triangular relationship I don't know who I want to comfort more.

I have a thing for The End fic but I don't think I ever read a story written from Sam's POV. Now your fic has made me damn curious. Why would Sam loose out to Lucifer in the end? And how would Cas react?

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