Duly noted and fixed. Thanks for the heads-up.

I love the complicated interweaving of Elijah's relationships with Viggo and with Dom, the blurred lines of friendship that keep getting harder to read.
Awesome. I'm glad that worked for you. :)

The words are oddly static, and we feel the tension shimmering just underneath the surface, fault lines that shift and change with every moment.
it isn't hearts and flowers, it's a bad haircut and too much silence.
Haha, the feedback's prettier than the story. Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.