The intoxication angle was wonderfully done. I loved this paragraph: They're all in that one room of the house that's really small. Elijah described it five minutes ago as "so small that it can fit inside my eyeball, and Orlando laughed and said "what? what?"... Especially the Orlando part, lol.
Dom was so cute in the ending, but I still found it sad.. Billy makes it so ominous. I didn't get what was on his shoulders that was making him so anxious. Like, was there something that happened before? But I still got that feeling of tension, so it's okay.
Wonderful work. I always look forward to reading your LOTRips.
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The intoxication angle was wonderfully done. I loved this paragraph:
They're all in that one room of the house that's really small. Elijah described it five minutes ago as "so small that it can fit inside my eyeball, and Orlando laughed and said "what? what?"...
Especially the Orlando part, lol.
Dom was so cute in the ending, but I still found it sad.. Billy makes it so ominous. I didn't get what was on his shoulders that was making him so anxious. Like, was there something that happened before? But I still got that feeling of tension, so it's okay.
Wonderful work. I always look forward to reading your LOTRips.