the aftermath isn't as messy as usual -- not for edmund, anyway. peter, however, breathing hard and uneven, he may want to change his trousers. his pupils are dilated and his lips slightly parted, and edmund kisses him, finally; a lingering kiss, warm and exploring, and he didn't know how much he had been craving the touch until he finds himself groaning into peter's mouth, exhaling wanton sighs.
"you may want to change," edmund says. "alternatively, we can take this to my bed." because although edmund's closet is spacious and far from being the most uncomfortable nook in the castle (that honor is reserved for the broom closet in the scullery, as he found out from that one time with the dryad serving girl), a royal bed is just that much more preferable.
he brushes peter's hair off his damp forehead. "yes?"
peter nods weakly, and edmund smiles.
THE END OMFG i need a cigarette
sorry i took liberties there and made peter nod, but UM. OMG. i just seized it BECAUSE THIS IS POSSIBLY THE FIRST COLLABORATIVE COMMENTFIC WE'VE DONE THAT HAS A COMPLETE BEGINMIDDLEEND. a first commentfic that is coherent and finished! and of course it is porn form.
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"you may want to change," edmund says. "alternatively, we can take this to my bed." because although edmund's closet is spacious and far from being the most uncomfortable nook in the castle (that honor is reserved for the broom closet in the scullery, as he found out from that one time with the dryad serving girl), a royal bed is just that much more preferable.
he brushes peter's hair off his damp forehead. "yes?"
peter nods weakly, and edmund smiles.
THE END OMFG i need a cigarette
sorry i took liberties there and made peter nod, but UM. OMG. i just seized it BECAUSE THIS IS POSSIBLY THE FIRST COLLABORATIVE COMMENTFIC WE'VE DONE THAT HAS A COMPLETE BEGINMIDDLEEND. a first commentfic that is coherent and finished! and of course it is porn form.