and another bonus of this thread is that whenever I go to answer the comment on the page, I am drowned in delightful Harry Potter pictures. :D


Wyrm, Gus, and Shawn sit at the corner table of a coffeeshop downtown, betareading each other's fics.

"'And then Lassiter caressed Lassiter's raven locks and stared deeply into her chocolate orbs'?" Shawn reads out. "Really, Gus? Really?"

Gus frowns. "What?"

"You're a 'raven locks and chocolate orbs' kind of writer?"

"It's called descriptive writing, Shawn," Gus sniffs.

"How about shortening Lassiter's name to Lass?" Wyrm suggests. "Or referring to Lassiter by his first name. You know, for flow."

Gus throws his hands up. "Everyone's a critic!"



...wyrm, this is officially the most ridiculous thing i have ever written.