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what a fortuitous occurrence ([identity profile] figletofvenice.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] whynot 2004-09-08 01:57 am (UTC)

The third part is my favorite. I love it.

He was about to turn RITA into IT when Murphy reached over and stuck another piece of duct tape on the inside of his wrist. I just love the flow of this, the way that what he's doing just bleeds into something else.

Sometimes Murphy would stick on pieces of duct tape on Connor’s body just for the hell of it, even when--especially when--Connor told him to stop. Can I see Murphy doing this? Hell yes. I love their personalities in this fic.

From the second part: Autumn was scrubbing out the last traces of summer Wonderful image!

Looooved this. It's all very simple, but detailed. And good. Yum. (Wow, quite coherent feedback I've got going one here. Really. ::snort::)

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