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Las ([personal profile] whynot) wrote2008-06-14 06:06 am

Let's be friends! :-D

Is anyone up for beta-reading a Narnia fic? Well, a Narnia fic or eleven separate Narnia fics, depending on how you look at it. It's 20 pages, or maybe 17-19 if you take out the liberal use of the Enter key. It's primarily movieverse, and mostly comprise of missing scenes from the film. There are no ships, unless you count Caspian/Susan, but they aren't the point of it. It's mostly about Peter, though he's rarely the primary voice.

I would appreciate it!

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2008-06-19 06:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh! I've already posted the first few pages (http://www.livejournal.com/tools/memories.bml?user=lassiterfics&keyword=Chronicles+of+Narnia:+Hidden+Pictures&filter=all), but I think it would be great to have another pair of eyes look at the rest, make sure all the lines make sense and whatnot. So yes, thank you! Awesome! How shall I get it to you?

[identity profile] girlgroovy3.livejournal.com 2008-06-19 06:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, you can email or message me! If you want my email, I can message it to you. (I'm a little paranoid when it comes to the internet...)

I can't say I can can get them done and to you this weekend. (My family is going out of town to my grandfather's... who doesn't have a computer. At All. 0_o) However, if you send me all that you want to be reviewed by this evening ot tomorrow everning, I can print them out, and edit them using the good ol' ink pen, and as soon as I get home and acess to a computer, send them on their way back to you! :D

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2008-06-19 07:18 pm (UTC)(link)
LJ message won't let me send, it exceeds the character limit. I guess I'll wait for you to message me your email then.