ext_9152 ([identity profile] miakun.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] whynot 2009-08-15 04:15 am (UTC)

Oh my god, you wrote CAPTAIN PLANET FIC?

I think I missed that before. I must correct that mistake when I get back and read the shit out of it. Especially since it has WHEELER. How mad are you that there aren't like a ton of planeteer shirts out in circulation? Come on with all the 80s and 90s stuff coming back into play and the Green trend? It is RIPE.

So I had never heard of this erasure thing, it is fascinating.

I really love this little bit:

a look on her face suggests she would like to crawl under him
drive him to hope
and it’s not like he already knew


It's so awesome. I know I had a writing teacher that once talked about just ripping a story up like that and putting it together on the floor, but I was always too lazy. That's still really neat. I like the sort of jagged feel it has to go with the situation that's conveyed.

PS: anyone wanna give me more Top Fives?

FIVE TIMES THE DRAGON WAS REALLY TEMPTED TO EAT MERLIN AND/OR ARTHUR

and/or

FIVE THINGS WILL WOULD HAVE DONE IF HE'D GONE TO CAMELOT

and/or

FIVE THINGS GWEN IS THINKING WHEN SHE HAS THAT 'YOU GUYS ARE EFFING STUPID' FACE (in the Beginning of the End, whatever the episode was called with Mordred)

And also, what is this dvd commentary thing, it's not really super clear on the info. Like you write as characters giving commentary or as an author doing it? None of the examples from last year were linking up either and I got frustrated like a five year old trying open a jar of peanut butter that's taped shut.

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