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Las ([personal profile] whynot) wrote2008-12-16 10:45 pm

"The Light of a Different Sun." Narnia. Glozelle. PG.

I have been meaning to write about Glozelle's new life in the south seas since, like, forever. Movieverse!Glozelle intrigued me, and also I just wanted to write about the tropics. In the end, it's about a little of both, but mostly about the Telmarines. Part two of the unofficial "Lassiter waxes pseudo-ethnographic about Narnia's enemies" series.

I have also completed my Secret Garden fic because finals week is obviously the best time to be fanfictionally productive. I still need to finalize it but, yeah, there will be Colin/Mary/Dickon shenanigans in the near future.


The Light of a Different Sun
Narnia. Glozelle, with blink-and-you-'ll-miss-it Glozelle/Prunaprismia. With kisses to Z, for the bugambilias.
The new world.

ETA: [livejournal.com profile] sgrio did a lovely erasure of this fic, which you can read here: parádeisos.


Glozelle emerges from Telmar's temperate climes and black mountains into the vivid brilliance of the tropics: a riot of colors, as merciless on his eyes as the sun is on his skin, from the flowers to the fruits to the insects and the birds. The beach, with its soft fine sand like gold dust; he scoops up a handful and lets it fall through his fingers, and the breeze carries it to the sea.

He walks into the water until the waves lap at his waist, and he can still see his feet distorted through the surface as little fishes dart unafraid around his legs. Glozelle ignores the Telmarines on the shore who watch him with amusement, the general of Miraz's armies splashing around in the ocean. Miraz is dead, after all, and they are in a new world.

Glozelle washes himself in the ocean that day, and the salt stings his eyes and it is a fine thing indeed.

+

There is no fall or winter here, and barely a spring: this island is of endless summer, and the Telmarines learn to divide the year by the coming of the rains.

There are soft and pleasant rains, cool to the skin and a welcome respite from the heat of the sun. There are also rains that are merciless and wild, bringing with them winds that fell trees and tumble boats. The first time these cyclones arrive, they lose half their stores and much of their supplies. Most of their homes, knocked down like matchsticks.

“We must not underestimate this new world,” Prunaprismia tells them, the set of her chin proud, her voice strong.

They learn, and they cope, and they move on.

In the first year nine people die, four of them children, from drowning, infected wounds, sickness, snakebite, eating the wrong plants. They bury their dead as an old man who had been a priest in Telmar recites litanies and adorations in a tremulous voice. His beard is as gray as his eyes, and he has a curious manner of raising his head as if straining to hear some distant chorus.

“Until this ceremony, I have not said a prayer since arriving in this new land,” the priest confesses to them, at the first funeral. “It does strange things to one’s faith to look upon a forgotten country’s god and to be under the mercy of its power. To realize that it is a very real power that it holds, and that it is forgotten no longer. We Telmarines are children of the heavens, and they love us as mothers and fathers do. In this way, we belong to the sun and the sky and the wind. We belong to the stars and the moon, those distant entities beyond our reach but whose blessings we are granted. Now we are in another world, given to us by another god.” He hesitates. “And, I do not know how to worship the gods of this new place, but it would only be right to start by honoring their earth, which now holds our dead. Through this burial, we entrust our own to its care. With our brother in this earth, we are bound to this earth.” The old priest lays a sprig of jasmine on the fresh grave, the best they can do in the absence of the traditional gardenia. “Love each other and love this land and its waters, for we know not the hearts of their gods. May our brother’s rest be blessed, for the earth has claimed him. May this earth be blessed, for it has claimed us.”

It is a strange conclusion to a funeral, but his words ring true and the man is old and beset by memories, so they let it pass. (In the coming weeks Glozelle would often find the old priest walking by himself along the shoreline, his eyes on the horizon seeking out what, he doesn’t know.)

And they learn. They cope. After all, death calls in all the worlds, and the passage of time will bring not just weeping for the dead, but also the cries of infants for whom this world will be the only home they know.

+

He appreciates the honest silence of the earth.

When birds open their beaks here, it is only birdsong. The monkeys chitter and grin, but not at any human joke. One time, Glozelle looked around to make sure he was alone, then spoke to a finch, feeling silly as he did so, but apparently you never know. The finch only cheeped back at him, turned its head to the side to regard him with one beady eye and cheeped again. And Glozelle, for his part, was relieved.

The sun browns their skins and burns their shoulders, the back of their necks. The jungle and the sea do not easily give up their bounty, but this suits him. A Telmarine needs no magic to ease his struggle, to tame the land or to shape himself. He wonders if this new peace in him is the blood of his ancestors singing the song of homecoming, or if it is just the intoxication of tabula rasa.

"Some combination of the two," Prunaprismia suggests.

"Yes," he replies, "or perhaps something else altogether."

"Perhaps," she agrees, smiling a secret smile, and Glozelle finds himself smiling back with affection.

In the distance they can see the fishermen's boats returning for the day, and he excuses himself. "They always need extra hands to pull the boats above the tide line," he explains.

The lady nods. "Do what you must."

And he makes his way down to his people, to the sea.

[identity profile] lyamainu.livejournal.com 2008-12-17 04:07 am (UTC)(link)
*sigh*

Perfect new beginning.

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2008-12-17 04:46 pm (UTC)(link)
:D

I developed a soft spot for movieverse!Glozelle and am glad he's not just randomly evil like in the book.
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[identity profile] bedlamsbard.livejournal.com 2008-12-17 05:13 am (UTC)(link)
OH GLOZELLE.

and also the sea, because the sea is many things: healer, killer, midwife, mother, mistress, wife, lifebringer. the sea, man, the sea.

...I have a thing for the sea, apparently.

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2008-12-17 04:51 pm (UTC)(link)
YES THE SEA. It is vast, it contains multitudes. If it contradicts itself, then it contradicts itself! I have more things to write about the sea, possibly during the Golden Age with some Pevensies romping around in the Lone Islands or whatever. With overt Pevencest winks because that is how I roll.

[identity profile] westingturtle.livejournal.com 2008-12-17 06:08 am (UTC)(link)
Oh Glozelle, may you find your place and your redemption among your people.

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2008-12-17 04:53 pm (UTC)(link)
I hope he does too :). I think he will. Man, I <3 movieverse!Glozelle.

[identity profile] starsimpulse.livejournal.com 2008-12-17 07:03 am (UTC)(link)
i absolutely love this. and find the idea compleatly facinating because it all most like our world is the same for the telmarines as narnia is for the pevensies, and i think i could muse on that idea for hours.

this was perfectly lovely and really beautiful. *kisses*

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2008-12-17 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)
our world is the same for the telmarines as narnia is for the pevensies
THAT IS EXACTLY WHAT I WAS GOING FOR. YOU WIN WIN WIN. <333333

What the Pevensies find in Narnia (taking things into their own hands, letting go of the shackles of the past), the Telmarines find in our world. Even the lack of magic is a bonus, 'cos Telmarines don't hold with that sort of stuff XD. It is magic enough to go from temperate Telmar into the VIBRANCY OF THE TROPICS.

Thank you! Yaaay!

[identity profile] animus-wyrmis.livejournal.com 2008-12-17 07:59 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, the Telmarines being awesome and learning to live in the tropics! And Glozelle being admirable and excellent and totally crushing on Pruniprisia! I loved them in the films, and yay, here they are. <3

Also, I am very excited for Secret Garden fic! Someone told me when I was about ten that Mary and Colin would get married, and it upset me greatly because what about Dickon? So I think this is an excellent solution and I am excited!

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2008-12-17 05:09 pm (UTC)(link)
I, too, loved them in the film! Movieverse!Telmarines, with their dignity and solemn honor and I dunno! Thanks. :)

WHAT ABOUT DICKON INDEED ;-O. Haha, I started it with a few sentences in the summer. Apparently if I really put my mind to it, I can take half a year to write 1500 words.

[identity profile] zempasuchil.livejournal.com 2008-12-17 08:05 am (UTC)(link)
and the salt stings his eyes and it is a fine thing indeed.
- ablutions! how much do I love this! especially "fine thing indeed" :D

Now we are in another world, given to us by another god.
oooohhh, yes. I really like this way of looking at it.

May this earth be blessed, for it has claimed us.
they belong to the laaaaaand!

I LOVE THIS HAPPY ENDING. To his people, to the sea! I wonder about the Telmarine fear of the sea - if it's different in a new land, or if it helps preserve them because it's such a wild thing.

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2008-12-17 05:29 pm (UTC)(link)
<33!

To the laaaand! To the seeeaaaa! To his peeeeeeooplleee. XD

Hmm, I didn't even think to expand on the Telmarine fear of the sea! I really should have, considering. I think the fear of the sea would both disadvantage and preserve them, but maybe it's more about the sea than it is about the Telmarines. Even when, after many generations, they refine the fear into watchfulness, the sea will continue to take and provide because the sea is vast and it contains multitudes, plays every role. The Telmarines will bend to it while they fight it still, and generations from now their descendants will say, "The sea is our brother; we are of the same blood." The sea's respect, like its mercy, is not easily given, but even in that, the Telmarines recognize something of themselves.

THE SEA THE SEA

[identity profile] zempasuchil.livejournal.com 2008-12-17 11:02 pm (UTC)(link)
I think there's something in that - the sea contains multitudes, I love love love it - and in their name, tel-marines. maybe they were just afraid of the sea like they were afraid of narnia, because it wasn't the land they were born to.

I wonder if Aslan just lets people wander in and out of that world, if the Telmarines came in and conquered Narnia. I wonder if it started good and soured.

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2008-12-17 11:44 pm (UTC)(link)
i wonder that too -- what is the extent of aslan's caprice? 'cos i have this thing that i dunno whether i want to turn into fic or faux historical document, about a religious war between telmarine ancestors and the narnians. 'cos, the incoming telamrines, they brought christianity with them, and narnians are offended at the telmarine god because of how it is jtus a crude imitation of aslan and the emperorbeyondthesea, and telmarines are likewise offended, because hey it's the narnians with the crude imitations. tempers flare and then there is holy war, aslan vs. jesus. and the narnians lost, and that's how telmar conquered narnia.

[identity profile] zempasuchil.livejournal.com 2008-12-18 12:12 am (UTC)(link)
I have some idea of the Telmarines coming with Christianity but losing their faith, like some of the Narnians went wild. OHHH. PARALLEL DEVELOPMENT.

I am also really intrigued by the idea of aslan versus jesus. and the underground heretics who believe they are the same and worship both, and the underground heretics who don't believe in either.

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2008-12-18 12:22 am (UTC)(link)
ooh i like that! mmmm parallel development. i forget how long the telmarines were in narnia before the pevensies came, enough to pick up new mythologies along the way? 'cos narnia is a magical land, and it may be easier to pick up new mythologies there.

yes yes! different strains of faiths, and melting pots, and etc. 'cos in TLB with all these people sent off into the darkness who didn't make it into aslan's country, it makes me really intrigued by the idea of other religions in narnia. i mean, tash is a real god; they see him and everything and apparently he kinda smells. a land of real gods! what happens about faith in a land like that?

[identity profile] zempasuchil.livejournal.com 2008-12-18 01:27 am (UTC)(link)
I think since they were adults it was probably harder for them to pick up new mythologies, harder than it was for the Pevensies. But they weren't like Uncle Andrew in the Magician's Nephew - they didn't deny themselves into total ignorance. And you're right! Real gods! Telmar probably has its own mythology. Something strangely reminiscent of the old world they came from - to the point where what was real then became myth in Telmar, and what was mythologized in their minds shifted. strange! I wonder what gods walk around there, how they confront man. and they didn't come with to Narnia; otherwise how could the Telmarines still fear the land? if their gods came with they would feel themselves destined to rule it. so they must have lost some aspect of their religion.

that darkness in TLB, that was the most depressing thing for me. Poor dwarves! They did good but they weren't even given a chance.

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2008-12-18 02:17 am (UTC)(link)
ooh yes! what is real is become mythology ooooooooh. and then in narnia what is real IS mythology, so the old telmarine religion is absorbed into this new land (or the other way around?) because what do you do with your trinity of invisible gods when you're looking one in the eye? how DO they confront man? and WHICH god offers himself to be worshipped by the telmarine? or styles himself or situates himself or tricks them, into worship. or does a new god emerge, shaped by the hearts of these foreigners?

speaking of gods coming with, have you read gaiman's "american gods"?

[identity profile] zempasuchil.livejournal.com 2008-12-18 05:34 am (UTC)(link)
God definitely evolved in the Narnia world. new shapes and powers from new hearts and sights. ooooo. shivers.

I have read it! Not recently enough. I liked it a lot, I remember that but little else.
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[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2008-12-18 02:19 am (UTC)(link)
<33!! oh sgrio! thank you very much, d'aaawwww XD

<3

ps: does one read BB as, like, 'baby'? or does it stand for 'best beloved'? i have always wondered!

[identity profile] venilia.livejournal.com 2008-12-18 10:52 am (UTC)(link)
ohhh! I like that Glozelle and Prunaprismia and the others get a nice new begining here. I like it a lot. I like Glozelle trying to talk to a finch, and I like him helping the fishermen, and I like the old priest.

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2008-12-18 07:18 pm (UTC)(link)
<33 Thank you! I have a soft spot for the old priest too, I almost gave him a bigger role in this. Haha, poor old priest.

[identity profile] silentsighs.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 08:55 pm (UTC)(link)
New beginnings! <3 And the fact that it is not easy but that it is right.

I like this a lot.

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 10:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! 'not easy but right' is what I wanted to get across :D. Oh Telmarines <3

[identity profile] bantha-fodder.livejournal.com 2008-12-20 07:32 am (UTC)(link)
that priest is pretty adorable.

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2008-12-20 08:28 am (UTC)(link)
I do like that priest. I wanted to give him a bigger part but he probably would've just rambled a lot (more than he has).