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Las ([personal profile] whynot) wrote2010-01-28 08:22 am

'your dirt removes my blindness' - Supernatural - Castiel/Dean - R

Ah, being a fandom latecomer. I am very sad that I missed this party :( but whatevs, I got a short Chuckfic in progress and a Mordred fic at beta. In the meantime, here is one of those obligatory 'The End' episode tags.

In the immortal words of the Mask:


SOMEBODY STOP MEEEEEE


your dirt removes my blindness
Supernatural. Castiel/Dean. R. Episode tag to 5x04.
"There are a thousand things he would have done differently with Dean Winchester." ~1221 words


In an elegant act of either cruelty or neglect, Castiel is allowed to keep his wings.

He shows them to Dean the way he did during their first meeting: as shadows on the wall. "Can't fly though," Castiel says. "I tried. Now they're only good for shadow puppets. Watch, I do a good eagle."

"I've seen better," Dean smirks.

It's all Castiel has after the angels left: invisible wings and something Dean calls 'spidey senses'. Castiel can still see demons and spirits for what they are, but he can no longer banish them. He can understand their true language, but he can barely achieve his true voice.

Tonight is not the first time Castiel is drunk, and it's not the first time they fuck. As he straddles Dean, he unfurls his wings with an achingly familiar motion and stretches them out as far as they can go, just for the sheer thrill of it. His fingers digging into Dean's skin will leave bruises, and Dean moans low as Castiel moves slowly, slowly, taking his time.

It has been a year since Detroit, and around them the world continues to end.

+

"O-kay," Dean-from-the-past finally says. "I see the zombie apocalypse hasn't broken you of your habit of getting into other people's personal space."

"Don't be foolish, Dean, I hold bi-weekly orgies." Castiel scrutinizes him, not letting go of Dean-from-the-past's shoulders. "I know all about personal space."

"Yeah, like how to violate it."

"Shh."

It's hard to focus. Castiel's vision is swimming and he isn't sure if it's because of the drugs or Dean, the old Dean, Dean before Croatoan, before Detroit, before everything. This man in front of him thrums with a vitality that used to call to Castiel before the sigils were carved into his bones. There's still compassion in this man, and hope that flows thick and slow like a muddy river. Castiel leans in close and he can feel Dean's heartbeat: slow, faster, fast.

"I can't believe it's really you," Castiel says fuzzily.

"I could say the same thing."

Dean-from-the-present has a scar over his left eyebrow from that one time with the machetes, but this Dean's brow is unmarred. Castiel lifts his hand to touch where the scar will be in a few years, and it's like remembering something he didn't even realize he's forgotten.

+

The camp is a beehive of activity and people trying to do a hundred different things at once, and Dean-from-the-past's bewilderment at the hubbub only reminds Castiel of how different things used to be. Once upon a time there were open skies and open roads, but now life's pleasures, like this camp, have become cramped and noisy and desperate. The thought doesn't sadden him anymore. Castiel can't be sad about it; there's too much amphetamine in his system.

All the same, he's glad to leave the camp for a while, Dean at his side like it's the good old days again. En route, Castiel explains his situation and he thinks Dean gets it, maybe, or he hopes Dean does anyway, but maybe it doesn't really matter. He starts telling Dean about life at camp and the wacky adventures that take them unawares ("The keys were under the croat corpse the whole time!"), and Dean chuckles along sometimes, smiles tightly other times.

The convoy stops at the safehouse where they'll spend the rest of the night. Castiel and past Dean are on first watch.

"So," past Dean ventures, "the angels just left you here? No postcards, no emails?"

"They didn't fire me," Castiel says, not without a hint of pride. "I quit."

"You quit?"

"I stayed."

"Why? I thought you said--"

"I stayed for you. I didn't know I was gonna go mortal."

Dean raises his eyebrows. "For me? You mean the other me."

"No, I didn't stay for 'the other you'," Castiel says irritably. "The 'other you' is what you became after you decided mercy and compassion were only holding you back. I stayed for you." He jabs a finger in Dean's chest. "You, as you are, right now."

The expression on Dean's face is one of wonderment and contemplative disbelief, and Castiel aches at the sincerity of it. In a way, Castiel has always wanted this. He feels the slow burn of desire pool in his gut, the need to reach out and touch Dean, to ascertain his solidity a second third fourth fifth time. There are a thousand things he would have done differently with Dean Winchester, but it isn't like he can go back in time for do-overs anymore. Dean goes forward in time instead and it's like a wish gone wrong. It is the things that are almost blessings that make the most painful curses.

"Cas..." Dean manages, "I'm not much of anything right now."

"That makes two of us," Castiel says as he shifts closer, and kisses him.

+

There is a light that hums brightly just under Dean's skin, and Castiel has not felt it in months, until now. Dean wraps himself around Castiel with a fervor unmarked by despair, and he remembers now what it was like to not have the dark clouds hovering. This building is cold and dirty, but they've fucked in worse places, and all Castiel is concerned with right now is getting as close to Dean as possible, to drink him in and taste him, feel him and make him feel. It's not quite turning back the hands of time, but maybe it's close enough under the circumstances.

Castiel used to think of Dean as the one unchanging thing in a world falling apart, and it's comforting to feel that again, at least for a little while.

+

It's time for the changing of the guard, and when Castiel and Dean return upstairs, Risa and other Dean are already awake.

"Everything okay out there?" asks Dean-from-the-present.

"All quiet on the western front," says Dean-from-the-past.

As they do a last minute check, Dean-from-the-present mutters quietly to Castiel, "You guys had fun?"

Castiel frowns, and Dean looks back coolly.

"What, are you jealous?" Castiel smirks.

His fearless leader doesn't answer, just tightens the laces of his boots.

"If you were having trouble sleeping, I have some extra valium," Castiel offers.

"Fuck you, Cas." He stands up and doesn't apologize when he shoulders Castiel out of the way.

When Dean and Risa are gone, Dean-from-the-past raises an eyebrow at Castiel and makes a 'what the hell was that' face. Castiel shrugs and makes a 'Dean-from-the-present is a bitch, what can I say?' face. He pops some valium and sacks out on the floor next to Dean, close but not too close, and he closes his eyes and waits for sleep. But--

"Cas," Dean says softly.

"What."

"I... All this stuff, this world. Everything. I'm sorry."

"Dean, you can't apologize for things you haven't done."

"I'm sorry you're not an angel anymore."

Something painful hitches in Castiel's chest, and he waits for it to dull before he replies. "It's not so bad," he finally says, because now that he's not an angel anymore, it's easier to lie.

+

In front of the Jackson County Sanitarium, present Dean returns from the trees alone.

"Where's past you?" Castiel asks.

"He's gone on ahead. Guns out, move fast," Dean orders, and grins a grin that doesn't quite reach his eyes. "We're ending this today."
ext_7893: (Dean-Cas)

[identity profile] mikes-grrl.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 02:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Gah...I have a lot of trouble reading 5.04 codas, due to the unrelenting despair of that future. It's not just Sam saying 'yes', or Dean losing his humanity, or Castiel losing his grace - it is the crumbling of their relationships, the utter lack of hope implicit in their histories to have gotten them to that point, that bothers me deeply. But since you wrote it, I had to read it, and I'm glad I did.

If only for:
"No, I didn't stay for 'the other you'," Castiel says irritably. "The 'other you' is what you became after you decided mercy and compassion were only holding you back. I stayed for you." He jabs a finger in Dean's chest. "You, as you are, right now."
Which is the essence of Castiel's tragedy here. I think the part where you kept his wings, but not his grace, captures the tragedy of Castiel being neither here nor there, of being in some ways nothing at all. Because what he sacrificed for, his faith in Dean, was proven false and what is left for a creature of devotion after that?

Very beautiful and sad, and of course excellently written. *sniffles* Damn you.

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 10:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha then thank you for taking a chance! :D I admit, the despair is one of the things that draws me to it. Maybe I just can't resist these post-apocalyptic scenarios.

what he sacrificed for, his faith in Dean, was proven false and what is left for a creature of devotion after that?
fsjfsjds thiiiiis. He's fucked up all the time not just to numb his humanity but also to numb his devotion. I mean, loser as he is now, Cas is still willing to follow Dean into insouciant plans after all.

[identity profile] 22by7.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 02:44 pm (UTC)(link)
"No, I didn't stay for 'the other you'," Castiel says irritably. "The 'other you' is what you became after you decided mercy and compassion were only holding you back. I stayed for you." He jabs a finger in Dean's chest. "You, as you are, right now."
This. This was the thing that made me despair so much about 5.04 (yes, even above the zombie apocalypse+ Sam!Lucifer). Was that what I was supposed to take away from the episode? I don't know. Somehow Castiel stole the show and all I could think was that line of Auden's - "We must love one another and die." - and everything it implies.

Castiel and his shadow puppets. I am going to hug myself now ;_;

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 10:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Me toooo but that is because when S4 started, this show kind stopped being 'Supernatural' in my mind and started being 'The Castiel/Dean Show!! <333'. This episode is one of my favorites.

"We must love one another and die." - and everything it implies.
:((((((( in a TOTALLY YES kind of way.

[identity profile] 2-journey.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 04:06 pm (UTC)(link)
This is gorgeous! It highlights everything that made me so sad I ached watching 5x04. You've really captured the heartbreak that was so evident in that episode.

I loved the distinction you made between past-Dean and present-Dean, and how this difference was so important to Cas.

Thanks for a great fic!

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 10:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank YOU! This episode is one of my favorites, bleak as it is.

[identity profile] mulder200.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 05:24 pm (UTC)(link)
You certainly captured the bleakness and despair of the eps. perfectly.

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 10:38 pm (UTC)(link)
...Thanks! :D? I have a soft spot for the post-apocalyptic stories.

[identity profile] perfumaniac.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 06:09 pm (UTC)(link)
The utter hopelessness of that ep makes the coda fics really hard to read but I love how you contrasted the bleakness of Castiel's existence and his "future death" with the life and sincerity that past Dean brings.

Heartbreakingly beautiful. Well done bb <3

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2010-01-29 04:48 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much! :)

[identity profile] ran-cl.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 08:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Castiel used to think of Dean as the one unchanging thing in a world falling apart, and it's comforting to feel that again, at least for a little while.


You've captured the sadness of 504 so well. Thanks for writing this *sniffles*

The wings shadow ...Leaving the wings on while Cas couldn't use them anymore is even more cruel than taking them away...kind of a reminder of how hopeless and helpless he is for the rest of his existence...

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2010-01-29 05:04 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks for reading :)
5x04 is pretty soulsucking, but I reckon that's why I got pulled to it in the first place.
ext_399535: ([supernatural] look at me)

[identity profile] spilled-notes.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 08:54 pm (UTC)(link)
oh Jesus, yes. I think this is one of the prettiest 5.04 codas I have ever read. No lie. ♥ It is a medley of beautiful and hurtful and warm and throbbing and soul-gripping and breathtaking and just, yes. Yes. ♥♥

You have a wondrous way with words, dear.

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2010-01-29 07:29 am (UTC)(link)
<3 Aww, thank you! Yeah I knew when I watched the episode that I was gonna fic for it. It was pretty compelling episode. I was a little hesitant because there were so many 5x04 codas out there already, but I guess that's to be expected when you're joining fandom late. So I'm glad you like it!
ext_38905: (misha/cas otp)

[identity profile] qthelights.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 08:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh this is lovely. Heartbreaking, yes, but the moments that broken!cas gets to spend with the Dean he stayed for, yes... just yes.

I also love the end - strangely I haven't seen a lot of fic that mentions how Cas reacts when Future!Dean comes back without Past!Dean. It's a lovely painful touch.

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2010-01-29 07:41 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

Neither have I. 'S one of the reasons I threw it in there. XD

[identity profile] ghostrunner7.livejournal.com 2010-01-28 09:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh god. I can't decide if I'm laughing or crying.

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2010-01-29 07:41 am (UTC)(link)
I hope you're enjoying yourself either way!

[identity profile] marycontraire.livejournal.com 2010-01-29 12:14 am (UTC)(link)
Poor Cas. This depressed me. Time to go re-watch the lapdance scene.

[identity profile] outlawradio.livejournal.com 2010-01-29 03:17 am (UTC)(link)
So gorgeously sad. I can't add more than what's already been said: Cas stayed for Dean, but Dean isn't Dean anymore. Positively heartbreaking.

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2010-01-29 02:37 pm (UTC)(link)
5x04 is positively heartbreaking :( I love iiiiiiit.

Thank you! :D

[identity profile] unoshot.livejournal.com 2010-01-30 01:04 am (UTC)(link)
Okay, you left so many pleasant comments on my journal I just had to surf on over here.

And this was very nice:

"Don't be foolish, Dean, I hold bi-weekly orgies." Castiel scrutinizes him, not letting go of Dean-from-the-past's shoulders. "I know all about personal space."

Love that line. I'm not a huge slash person, but I do enjoy a well-written story (particularly when it is porn free; I am a delicate flower). You are talented!

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2010-01-30 06:07 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Aww, I'm psyched you like it :D . Yay for taking a chance on slash. <3

[identity profile] cassyl.livejournal.com 2010-01-30 06:27 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is gorgeous. Cas' longing is fantastic -- sad without being maudlin. Once of the reasons I love Cas in "the End" so much is that it's like finally hearing what a very circumspect person is actually thinking, and you deliver that very nicely, giving us a great perspective on Cas' motives for staying behind. This is just lovely in general - a light touch, nice language, and good characterization.

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2010-01-30 12:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! Glad it worked for you :) . Oh Cas Cas Cas. Even in the future you will follow Dean into insouciant plans.

[identity profile] ibroketuesday.livejournal.com 2010-01-30 06:57 am (UTC)(link)
This hurts so good. It's beautifully written and IC. Ugh, love.

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2010-01-30 02:41 pm (UTC)(link)
<33 Thank you! Also, omg your icon is adorable.
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[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2010-01-30 02:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Here, I have extras: <3 <3 <3 <3

[identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com 2010-02-02 05:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh! Brilliant, but painful ending!

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2010-02-02 09:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks :) 5x04 never fails to break my heart and yet I love it so.

[identity profile] x-desdemona-x.livejournal.com 2010-02-04 05:09 am (UTC)(link)
that totally just broke my heart but i loved every moment of it :)

ps i dont know what icon this is because i forgot to put in keywords, so if it's entirely unrelated its not my fault :P

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2010-02-04 05:20 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks :) Glad you liked.

[identity profile] veggie17.livejournal.com 2010-02-19 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, God, I love this. It's sharp like a knife, and your wording is perfect. I just can't stay away from anything 5.04-related, and this was a perfect fix. I love it, thank you!

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2010-02-19 10:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! I know what you mean about 5x04, it's so sad but so compelling! I'm working on a longer 5x04-related fic right now, is how much I love that episode.

[identity profile] starkraves.livejournal.com 2010-03-17 06:29 am (UTC)(link)
-snugs fic close- Mmmmm... because we all know Castiel likes past!Dean best. Future!Dean is an asshole. Also he kills everyone. Lovely as usual.

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2010-03-18 12:48 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Ah, the future!Cas/past!Dean angst-o-rama that I so loooooove. (Future!Dean maybe needs loving from past!Dean too.)

[identity profile] fearlessfan.livejournal.com 2010-04-12 04:18 am (UTC)(link)
I really loved this. I haven't read many codas to 5x04 because I found the world in it to be so bleak and painful, and I'm so glad I decided to try this story, because it was amazing. I love the way you write Castiel's point of view in this, and this line:

"It's not so bad," he finally says, because now that he's not an angel anymore, it's easier to lie.

just slayed me. Awesome story.

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2010-04-12 04:39 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! Croatverse is definitely bleak but I think that's why I'm so drawn to it. I love to read and write it.

[identity profile] vasiliki.livejournal.com 2010-08-09 11:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Something painful hitches in Castiel's chest, and he waits for it to dull before he replies. "It's not so bad," he finally says, because now that he's not an angel anymore, it's easier to lie.

You're breaking me!

*sigh* I can't believe I already read all your Dean/Castiel fic! (I didn't comment on all of them) I noticed your more recent fics aren't about them. I hope this doesn't mean you don't find writing them as appealing anymore. (*sigh* I know S5 was nothing like the brilliant S4 for those two) I love Dean/Castiel on screen, but I can't read the fic because they're so OOC - but you write them so well, that I feel it'd be a huge loss if you stopped!

I'd LOVE, LOVE, LOVE to see a sequel to "Heaven Sent You Downstream". You wrote them so IC there, so entrenched in canon, that it's thrilling to think how you'd manage to get them more physically intimate while keeping them so IC! (I'm not even sure it COULD be done!)

[identity profile] twoskeletons.livejournal.com 2010-08-10 11:36 am (UTC)(link)
Hee! I am pleased as punch that you are enjoying my fics, I really am. Thank you for being an enthusiastic reader! I write gen these days, but my secret is that many of my gen fics are actually Dean/Cas in sheep's clothing. ;) I don't know if I can ever completely abandon ship. I am very much about the UST though. If my gen has Dean and Cas in it, it's probably pre-slash.

If you're interested, here are some of my gen/preslash Dean&Cas fics that have a strong Dean/Cas slant:
The Future as B-Movie (http://lassiterfics.livejournal.com/139184.html#cutid1) and its sequel Bring Out Your Dead (http://lassiterfics.livejournal.com/139808.html)
Personal Space Invasions (http://lassiterfics.livejournal.com/141699.html#cutid1)
and a new one that I haven't put on my masterlist yet: Again and Again (http://lassiterfics.livejournal.com/155608.html)

Oh, and. I guess there's Ashes, Ashes (http://lassiterfics.livejournal.com/153964.html), but that one's kinda weird. I wrote it for Blindfold, and it's Castiel using Claire Novak as a vessel, so there's some hinky underage sexing going on there.

I've also bookmarked some of my favorite Dean&Cas fics on delicious account (http://delicious.com/lassiterz/dean%26castiel+%3C3). I guess you can also look through my recs tag (http://lassiterfics.livejournal.com/tag/.recs).

Hope you find what you're looking for. <3

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